Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-30079501-20170606200700/@comment-29773086-20170606203956

Written well, but I think in trying to sound exotic with your wording, it sounds almost a little Shakespearean. And as you must remember, such a text would be either a translation from another language (with probably basic translations) or originally written in 'English' (and therefore use basic vocabulary). This sounds more like a Valinorean's work than a Southron's.