Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-26065088-20170528192054/@comment-29773086-20170529034106

Sinthorion wrote: Grammar and spelling upgrade!

 This is the history of Carmâb, the last prince of the Kingdom of Cardolan, the southermost kingdom of Arnor. My name is Hallas and I'm one of the last noble civilians of the old city of Tharbad. This document is based on tales from the farmers and workers of Tharbad. They say all that these are true, however, I still think these are just legends. I can't believe them.
 * 1) written by Gorbag12
 * 2) author:Hallas, Scribe of Tharbad
 * 3) title:Cârmab, last prince of Cardolan
 * 4) types:eriador
 * 1) types:eriador

Carmâb was a simple prince and, unlike his father, hated fight and gloryful adventures. Instead, he always went to the fields and helped the poor farmers. But then, Cardolan was mainly destroyed by the forces of Angmar and Carmâbs family had to flee from Cardolans forgotten capital city to the barrow downs, the farmers weren't allowed to visit this place, so he didn't accepted this and decided to die with his real friends.

His father, a great king, was sad about his sons decision but he already thought that everyone will die, so he gave him his free will. The farmers were very happy and called them their chief lord. Carmâb led many of the farmers and fishers to hidden caves and it is said that they survived there, unlike the most other civilians of Cardolan, including the King and his family, which were attacked by spirits from Angmar, also known as barrow wights.

The farmers stayed years in that cave, and the days passed and Carmâb grew very old. Its said that he and the farmers made a very well job, which nobody should never knew: They attacked the camps and outpost of Angmar during the night and a lot of Angmar's soldiers and Orcs died during their march to Arthedain.

But after Carmâbs dead, the last farmers decided to make an gloryful attack: All of them died during the "Last Battle for Cârmab", but a lot more of the Hillmen, Orcs and Trolls of Angmar found their way to death, even if nobody from Fornost ever heard from these gloryful farmers and fishers. Couple of errors you missed, Sinth, and I had to depart from the original to correct some. Here, I fixed it:

 This is the history of Carmâb, the last prince of the Kingdom of Cardolan, the southermost kingdom of Arnor. My name is Hallas and I'm one of the last noble civilians of the old city of Tharbad. This document is based on tales from the farmers and workers of Tharbad. They say all that these are true, however, I still think these are just legends. I can't believe them.
 * 1) written by Gorbag12
 * 2) author:Hallas, Scribe of Tharbad
 * 3) title:Cârmab, last prince of Cardolan
 * 4) types:eriador
 * 1) types:eriador

Carmâb was a simple prince and, unlike his father, hated fighting and glorious adventures. Instead, he always went to the fields and helped the poor farmers. But then Cardolan was mostly destroyed by the forces of Angmar, and Carmâb's family had to flee from Cardolan's forgotten capital city to the Barrow-downs; the farmers weren't allowed to visit this place, so he didn't accept the situation and decided to die with his real friends.

His father, a great king, was sad about his son's decision, but he already thought that everyone would die, so he gave him his leave. The farmers were very happy and called him their chief lord. Carmâb led many of the farmers and fishers to hidden caves and it is said that they survived there, unlike the most other civilians of Cardolan, including the King and his family, who were attacked by spirits from Angmar, also known as barrow-wights.

The farmers stayed years in that cave, and the days passed and Carmâb grew very old. It is said that he and the farmers did a very good job, which nobody ever discovered: they attacked the camps and outpost of Angmar during the night, and a lot of Angmar's soldiers and Orcs died during their march to Arthedain.

But after Cârmab's death, the last farmers decided to make an glorious attack; all of them died during the "Last Battle for Cârmab", but a lot more of the Hillmen, Orcs and Trolls of Angmar found their way to death, even if nobody from Fornost ever heard from these glorious farmers and fishers.