Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27200931-20170529235754/@comment-25376906-20170530102621

That's an interesting site. I remember these strories from my childhood and they are pretty crazy sometimes. About your text: I like the story but you could improve the style to make it more "ancient". Shorter sentences may be appropiate, after all this was witten by a Dalishman and not a Lore-master of Gondor.