Thread:The Second Age Server/@comment-29688205-20160819122008/@comment-29095449-20160903193234

Good day, while your application contains a lot of good informations, I'm afraid you would need to edit a lot of bits or it would have to be declined. First of all, you seem to apply for a faction, which does not yet exist as that (Dale wasn't founded till the Third Age). However, we could make this work but you would need to apply for the creation of Dale with a proper story attached to it with what the faction is, why it was created and so on. Second of all, you claim an extremely large area as you do not only claim Dale but all of Wilderland as well. The lore of your factions inflicts with the proper lore as well, as in SA1600, it is extremely unlikely that people all the way up to the North East at Dale would have met the Númenoreans, simply because Númenoreans tended to stick to the coast, while your people seems to stick to your land far in the North East. There are multiple reasons for why your faction claim would not work, but I am not going to go too much into it as of now. However, here is a solution of how it could work out:

The lore of your character seems great, and I therefore suggest you apply for him only (in a new application) but for the Vale faction. There you and the Vale could start a Conquest of the North-Eastern part of Middle Earth (where Dale is) where a new kingdom would be forged under the rule of your character. From there on you could go further and further into the things you've just told about. But from a starting point, you would have to start a bit more simple if you asked me. You could of course make a proper custom faction application for Dale (like Elestel did for Edhellond), but your character would most likely not be the brother of Adalwulf then. And you would have to go into nice details with it so we, in staff, can see where you're going with it so we don't just think you want to start a silly faction, but actually want a proper faction with lore going on, lore which you would have to change since Dale originally wasn't founded until the Third Age. These are some suggestions to how it could work out at least.

I hope you will take these things into consideration and we look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards, mikkelkagen