Board Thread:Suggestions forum/@comment-34241117-20180311022920/@comment-26149161-20180314120722

Seems good, though please title your threads more creatively ;P

The only issue I see seems to be the long vowels you put in to show a lengthened word. They just look kind of ridiculous. Overall the song is good, though I would change "chug", "don't be a fool", and "look so smug", which don't fit Tolkien or don't make sense with the lyrics. Ithilion, Discussions Moderator (Auta i lómë)