Board Thread:Forum Roleplays/@comment-26041296-20150217232020/@comment-26129068-20150223091459

66.66.80.123 wrote: Name: Aradorn

Race:Noldor Elf

Titles: Weilder of Ringil, Heir of Fingolfin, Lord of Minas Celeb, Head Assassin, Artifact Collector, the Pirate Assassin

Other Names: Aradorn the assassin

Weapons: Ringil, High Elf Bow, High Elf Dagger, Hidden blades on bottoms of wrists, mithril ring which enhances his stealth and speed

Age: 300

Armor: (Assassin) Chain mail, tunic made of same material as  elven cloaks, wood elf scout hood, woof elf scout leggings, wood elf scout boots (Open Combat) wood elf scout hood, High elf armor

Skills: a master assassin, moderately skilled at black smithing, and an expert archer and swordsman

Realms ruled: South-most Eriador Downs

Capitol of kingdom: Minas Celeb

Allies: Lindon, Lothlorien, Woodland Realm, Gondor, Rohan, Umbar, Avari elves, Northern Rangers, Ered Luin.

Enemies: Angmar, Daol Guldur, Mordor, Gundabad, Rhun, Utumno, Khan

Military forces

30,000 high elf citizens

2,500  high elf warriorrs

10,000 Galadhrim elf citizens

1,500 Galadhrim elf warriors

600 Pirates of Umbar

20 Black Numenorians

BackStory: At the age of 5, Aradorn's father, Anathrain, was slain while on an assassin contract. When his mother, Aladriel, found out, she and Aradorn travelled to Rivendell so they would both be safe. When he was 20, Aradorn began to wander a bit too far from the Valley of Imladris, and his mother was too protective of him. While Aladriel was looking for Aradorn, she was killed by Xaglor, an immortal Gundabad orc cheiftain living in the Grey Mts with his Company. The next Morning, Aradorn found his mothers mutilated body right in the valley under the platform which would later host the Council of Elrond. Ever Since, Aradorn has held a grudge on Xaglor, who has somehow always escaped Aradorns murder attempts.

This si my first Role play Dude seriously. You CAN'T have an army of 44,000 ELVES. There weren't even that many elves in the third age. There were probably about 10,000 elves in the third age and i dont think many of them would have been in one huge army. What i suggest to make your army more realistic is remove the high elf citizens and the galadhrim citizens, that would be quite realistic.