Talk:Updates/@comment-26946666-20161203094034/@comment-25330335-20161203143835

I like it. If you want to expand a little, that's fine, but it's a really good start. Also needs links.

To everyone else, these are the kind of edits that I really like. They look professional enough to stand on their own, but they have things that can clearly be improved upon by less experienced editors. It really helps to grow the community.