Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-35283741-20180424014655/@comment-35283741-20180424023550

Sir Lazuli wrote: I love how poetic almost everything the Rohirrim say is. This does capture that quite well, I like a lot of the lines and can definitely hear the rhythm. Perhaps if you just tweaked it a bit more to make the number of syllables in each line uniform it would be very nice. I would just add more syllables to the shorter lines so you don’t need so many apostrophes in the longer ones. Or cut down the longer lines a bit.

Maybe I can change "shadow" into "shade" or do something like that?