Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-31507215-20180311195915/@comment-31507215-20180312132336

@CreeperKid - That is definitely worth considering, but I don't think it fits the rythm quite right. Thanks for the suggestion, though.

@Edhelgwath - Ummm. ..

@OneBehindTheHair - Thanks! That is something close to what I want the last line to be, but that doesn't fit the rhyme scheme. The problem I have with my last lines is that they sound a little tacky, but I may end up just changing a few of the syllables to make it sound less odd.

@IronJaw - Thank you for the suggestion! That is a very good poem, but I would rather write these myself, as Ithilion said. I would, however, suggest that you post that on the Lore Texts Board yourself, so you can get due credit for that one.

@Ithilion - Thanks!

@Creeperkid - Yup