Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-26878735-20170529192601

Hey, this is my text that i wrote/ the idea that i had for an text. I first of all need say that im not the best in english, since im a foreigner and has a writing-disorder sickness (I dont know the english name for it)

i tryed to find most of the mistakes, but there are surely quite some left. it would be nice if you tell me which. And of course suggestions for improovement would be nice 