User blog comment:TheShade6/Constriction of Freedom - My issue with Mevans' Vision/@comment-25597877-20150812173522

I never meant offense and either way remember my very first sentence but your analogy doesn't fit, this isn't critisizing a draft this is closer to voicing my concerns on a spin off sequal novel that while it is VERY good it doesnt follow the same themes, much like when directors take over a series