Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-32239378-20170608221226/@comment-25376906-20170609090507

I like it. Sounds like the rendition of High Elven lore by Avri Elves who have only heard of the story but not experienced it themselves. Constructive criticism: in line seven "the" and in line 10 "brave". Also "Went down to city" misses a "the" imo and "You need me now than ever". Even better for the understanding would be "You need me now more than ever". Also you should look for an Sindarin elven name as author. Fix this and throw in some more interpunctuation, and you can count me in.