Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27200931-20170601032527/@comment-27200931-20170601211203

TheSquidychicken wrote: I am starting to think Dragonovith just wants to add something very violent to the mod :P Well, If Minecraft wasn't E rated, I would get more graphic with the descriptions.

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By the way, doesn't anyone have any opinions about the prose, how well the story flows and if there any grammar mistakes? I'm not used to this, writing stories in English is a new experience for me, so some constructive criticism would come in handy.