User blog comment:High Prince Imrahil/Adventures of High Prince Imrahil part 3: The Battle of Barazagûr/@comment-25356210-20150531010559/@comment-26116279-20150531031242

More constructive criticism, maybe make it a bit of a cliffhanger for the fates of the other named characters, or tell their fates, don't just tell the fates of you and a one other unless there is some mystery that is supposed to be surrounding the fates of other characters