Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27200931-20170529235754/@comment-27200931-20170530133516

TheSquidychicken wrote: For some reason I love this story. Thank you.

Crossbuilder wrote: That's an interesting site. I remember these strories from my childhood and they are pretty crazy sometimes. About your text: I like the story but you could improve the style to make it more "ancient". Shorter sentences may be appropiate, after all this was witten by a Dalishman and not a Lore-master of Gondor. I'll try, but since English isn't my native language, that's a barrier to cross.