Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27991709-20170528055502/@comment-30645975-20170528200305

207.62.170.212 wrote: Forten wrote: Keep in mind the number of syllables on each line, and whether the first syllable of each is on the beat or before the beat. Also interesting synonyms. But otherwise, keep up the good work.

This is more of a poem than a song but I'll keep that in mind. Rhythm is equally important in poetry, unless it's free-verse (which doesn't sound as good personally).