Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-32865299-20180121160140/@comment-26149161-20180122143109

This sounds far more Rohirric to me tbh

"Asunder"? That means "divided" or "shattered in two". That word doesn't really work. And I recommend you use "shivered" to replace "shaken". It makes it slightly less like Theoden's speech.

Overall, though, it's pretty good. I think it could work well for Rohan.

Ithilion, Discussions Moderator (Auta i lómë)