User blog comment:High Prince Imrahil/New Series?/@comment-25330335-20160205031959

I'm interested in something new. On a different note...

Your 3rd person narration is superb. More than perfection, in my opinion. Your dialogue has a little room for improvement. I don't mean to be rude, I hope you take this as constructive criticism. I would suggest adding a little action between dialogue exchanges, shich as the shuffling of cloaks, or something going on in the background. That could be good in a spy story... Anyway, back on topic, the speaking seems a tiny bit woody. It needs just a tad more emotion. In general, your writing is amazing. Please keep writing, this preferred, but if we get more, I'll read.

Also, I'll think about formatting in the blogs. Personally the wall of text that is a basic blog looks a little intimidating to me. If there is a way to split it up into pages, then I'll do my best to find it.

Please don't be offended, only trying to help. :)

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