Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-35283741-20180413032626/@comment-25841881-20180413033210

The line "With leaves ne'er wither," sounds a little awkward. I'd suggest maybe Whose in place of With. Instead of saying that the flower flies with never-withering leaves, it says that the flower, with leaves that don't wither, flies. Handles the problem of improper conjugation of wither.