Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-26486187-20170529032255/@comment-29773086-20170529035220

A few corrections:

Arthedain isn't a city, so it does not have buildings or streets. Instead use Fornost- the last city of Arnor to hold out.

The Dúnedain remnants, barring Arvedui and his Guard, went east, over the Lune. If this guy had gone North, he would have seen Arvedui who fled in the same direction.

King Arvedui.

And you need to check your spelling in a few cases. :P