Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-2001:8003:A899:800:7112:FB5B:7177:E604-20180309080514/@comment-26149161-20180309124238

I love it! My only thought would be to perhaps add a rhyming scheme, but if you can't do that without ruining the poem's meaning, it's alright as it is.

Ithilion, Discussions Moderator (Auta i lómë)