Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-28565579-20170529205240/@comment-30645975-20170529210404

That's amazing! Just one question: in the second stanza, is "Awayed" really a word? Could that be replaced with  ?

In addition, the rhythm might sound better if the last line of the 6th stanza became

The poem is wonderfully written, and quite deep. I hope this is added so I can look for this book in my travels!