Board Thread:Story Forum/@comment-26063164-20150524010850/@comment-26457908-20150604071701

An imaginative storyline, with very few grammar/spelling mistakes, not always the words I would use, but it builds the connections with the characters within the first few paragraphs. Overall a very good story :D

P.S. I can help with spell/grammar checking if you want an external source, as I find that when other people read my work they always see things that I didn't, being the one who wrote it. :)

Ozwizius Prime (a bit of a character) Knight of the Raven Skies  (Shout Really Loud)