Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27200931-20170529235754/@comment-25376906-20170601065516

Crossbuilder wrote: That's an interesting site. I remember these strories from my childhood and they are pretty crazy sometimes. About your text: I like the story but you could improve the style to make it more "ancient". Shorter sentences may be appropiate, after all this was witten by a Dalishman and not a Lore-master of Gondor. I'll try, but since English isn't my native language, that's a barrier to cross. Don't worry, I'm well aware of that. In fact, I am sure that many of the submissions come from people who learn English as second language and still the texts are perfectly fine in most cases. What helped me to develop a sense of "ancient" was reading a lot of books in English, LOTR of course but also the Silmarillion or ASOIF. It is not something you can learn from one day to the other, but with every book you read (in English :)) it will improve.