Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-28565579-20170529205240/@comment-28565579-20170529214545

High King Ithilion wrote: This is great. My only complaint is the last line. Is there a way to make it sound more Middle-earthy?

Ithilion, Discussions Moderator (Auta i lómë) 21:38, May 29, 2017 (UTC) I was kind of trying to make a reference to the fact that Valinor was utterly removed from Middle-earth, except from those who could travel the "straight path"