Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-32863419-20171014112405/@comment-26149161-20171014170403

Here's an edited version I made to make it slightly more "elvish" in nature, though the whole thing still seems to lack an Elvish rythym imo. Might I also recommend changing the name of the writer to Ellhael, which means the same thing?

"Beneath the mountains, where cold mist lies

Dwell ancient things, feared by the wise.

Dwarven ruins abandoned and sad

And goblin-caves in Gundabad.



Lordly knights on white sand shores.

Lonely men on forsaken moors.

Far lands corrupted and dead.

Within the dark, an Eye of red.



Elven valor face shadowy fear,

But darkness be found even here.

We may fence our home against without.

But the world shan't stay forever out.



Middle-earth is old and worn

<p class="MsoNormal">Its past in books, their pages torn.

<p class="MsoNormal">Grey is land and grey is fate

<p class="MsoNormal">Our day is ended, the hour is late.

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<p class="MsoNormal">We shall away from rocky cove

<p class="MsoNormal">To land of youth and laden grove.

<p class="MsoNormal">As the Havens fade away,

<p class="MsoNormal">We go for lands where forever we stay."

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