Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-25104255-20170709020644

Our dear Sam Gamgee built up the courage to write a letter to his love, Rose Cotton. Of course, the poor hobbit never delivered the thing, but hey, it's the thought that counts! (Sort of.)

This is my first time doing a Lore Text poem, so ideas/improvements would be appreciated. I want this to be pretty much as sappy as possible, to where Sam can't go through with sending it.

 Oh dear Rose, child of the Shire, you set this hobbit's heart on fire. Like fireflies my feelings shine, for one I hope one day'll be mine.
 * 1) title:To Miss Rose Cotton
 * 2) author:Samwise Gamgee
 * 3) types:shire

Oh dear Rose, eyes so blue, a vision of beauty, it is true. From sunny days to Astron showers, with fragrance of the sweetest flowers.

Oh dear Rose, when you dance, the world is put in awestruck trance. A girl of wonder, that's Miss Rose. The best that this ol' hobbit knows.

The Shire is lovely, a place I adore. But with you around it's so much more. Oh dear Rose, maiden so sweet, you are what makes my life complete. With love, Samwise Gamgee 