Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-31086920-20170529215305/@comment-28565579-20170529221219

fall *off* their horse*

I think this is good, obviously lore wise Dunlandings probably would not be literate, and it does paint an image of them as being more civilised than they are in reality - "contracts", and even the concept of writing a letter home seems a bit out of character for a Dunlanding, infact your language makes them seem more civilised than elves at times! I obviously understand why you wrote it like this though, and it is good! :)

I assume "Sorcerer" is reffering to Saruman - would it not be easier to refer to him as "Saruman" or "The Wizard" or something alike - "Sorcerer" is not wrong, but is more commonly associated with Sauron than Saruman

I am not sure whether some of your line ends are in the correct place - I suggest you check that