Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-33763020-20180130195747/@comment-33763020-20180131173112

Err, no. My above message did not reply to your revision, mind you ;), which I am reading now. And so the game of back-and-forth revisions starts..

The following of your revisions I cannot agree with:

1. I wrote in my comments the hearty friendship that evolved between them. Hardly proper to call your friend a rat, I would omit that or change it to raskal or something of the kind.

2. The wife is not ill: she does not want to see her adult husband getting drunk because the archeologist has much better tales and the dwarf cannot keep up with it, gets drunk and makes a mess. In a household a woman usually makes sure to keep her husband's juvenile behaviour in check, is what I wanted to achieve with that point.

3. The point of actually SELLING something may be your perception of dwarf mentality, but they are not a deceiving kind, honour stands much higher in their lives. The pickaxe I wrote was the prize to be won on fairplay, not to be sold as a business transaction after being beaten at a game. Again, I think the fact that we talk about friends here makes this clear.

4. Any reason why Bromdin would not go for a dwarfish name?..