Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-35283741-20180510101318/@comment-26149161-20180510143943

Looks great! It seems very Anglo-Saxon in style.The only problem I can find is the spelling of "ascended" (not "acceded"). And perhaps "returned" rather than "rewoke" in the same line?

Ithilion, Discussions Moderator (Auta i lómë)