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LoTR FA RP Application: Goredhil, Tormented Elf, Lord of Utumno Remnant

IGN: _Mimix

Applying for: Leadership of Utumno Remnant

Roleplay Character: Tormented Elf

Name Translation: Dread-Elf

In the pits of Utumno, only terror and dread prevailed. Formerly ruled by the Dark Lord Melkor himself, the fortress was ruined as Melkor was brought as prisoner to Valinor. Many Elves were brought to this place of horror, tormented and cruelly turned into likenesses of Orcs(It must be remembered that in the later part of his life Tolkien stated Orcs came from Men, not the enslaved Elves; see Morgoth's Ring). One of these was Goredhil. He was different among the elves. He believed that the Children of Illuvatar were a nuisance and impurity to Arda. He saw Melkor as not so bad, and realized Melkor simply wanted the world empty. Goredhil (though not called that at the time) then commited murder and killed some Elves. The Elves became alarmed and drove him out. He then came to Utumno proudly stating his deeds, his plans of darkness, and requested power from the Dark Lord to rid the world of Elves. To be made stronger. This intrigued Melkor, as this Elf was different. He evidently had a heart of darkness, but he was proud. So, Melkor threw him into his dungeons, and after 100 years of torture, he had forgotten even his own name. He had a heart of darkness and came to Utumno to be stronger. The Dark Lord twisted him further, and through torture he came to change his original plan. He wanted all free, good things to die. He wanted others to know the pain he felt; he wanted to damage all. He had not been in Utumno too long, but Melkor saw value in him. He was terrifying to look upon; an effect of his torture. He then named himself anew, and become the Dread Elf. But, as Utumno was ruined and Melkor took rule in Angband, the refugees who did not go to Angband followed Goredhil; powerful Orcs and beasts of Utumno ravaging Arda pleased Melkor. Before capture by the Valar, Melkor had placed him in charge of leading these orcs to the ruin of the free peoples. Later, as these orcs were pestering the Elves and other denizens of Arda, Goredhil himself led a raiding party upon a small elven gathering found in the wood, apparently feasting. Goredhil drew his bow, and so did the Orcs under his command. Seconds later, a shower of arrows was launched, and a tormented Elf and many orcs were charging down. These arrows caught many Elves off-guard, but not completely. To the shock of Goredhil, these elves immediately turned around and drew weapons. They were expected. It appeared that the elves saw them nearby tracking them and had set up a trap. It was a fierce battle, and Goredhil personally cut down several of these elves. It would be likely they would have lost had it not been for the shower of arrows beforehand. Eventually, only two remained; Goredhil and a Sindar warrior. The two faced each other, surrounded by the desolation of battle. "My kin, why have you turned to darkness? Melkor is not the way. Turn back to the Valar," said the elf. Goredhil faced him, and growled back. "My path is set. There is no other option for me. Your kin are doomed." Goredhil was wounded from battle, the other elf was far better off. "Very well then, your fate is nigh," said the elf as he approached. Goredhil then dropped down and snatched a crossbow from the hands of a dead orc and raised it and fired as fast as he could. Having been caught by surprise by him having fallen to the ground, the Sindar dropped dead. Weary, Goredhil then returned alone to Angband. Melkor was glad at the death of the elves, Goredhils decision, and gave no heed to the orcs that perished. He promised control of the Utumno Remnant, the ravaging orcs, to Goredhil and sent him back to his party of rampaging orcs. Goredhil prepared for the journey at once, and set out to walk alone across the length of Beleriand into Eriador. He went through many sleepless nights and trivial tasks. He wanted to waste as much energy on work as he could to prove his strength and will. One night, he was preparing a fire and began to chop tree limbs for firewood. Larger logs he simply split with his bulky cleaver (He used Orcish gear). Something was unnatural in the woods around him. Something stirring watching, angry. Goredhil grabbed his shield and put on a helmet of bone. "Who comes to this fire, to challenge the Dread Elf of Utumno? Whoever the foe, they will be slain. Leave now or die!" he proclaimed. An old voice replied: "You cut the trees, and burn their flesh. You are ignorant to life. You were once an Elf pleasant and merry, now you are a monster. Shall I let you go? Or do you continue to threaten these trees I know." Goredhil now realized he was dealing with an ent and began to worry. He was alone, but Melkor's words rang in his ears. If he was stronger.... Goredhil, having eyes that can see well in the dark, raised his crossbow and fired without a word. A loud moan of pain rang through the forest as it struck the ent in the eye. But little damage was done, and it began to charge. As it sweeped the air around Goredhil's head he ducked under and slashed at its legs as it ran by. Again, not too much damage but infuriating. The ent turned around and smashed at the ground by his feet; Goredhil was now on the ground. It reached for him and he held up his shield. The ent then grabbed and crushed the shield. But it bought him time and he was able to get up. He ran to the fire  and grabbed a large, flaming log and swung it at the approaching ent. The fire spread and the ent began to back away in panic. As it doused itself, Goredhil regained his bearings. He then charged the ent and jumped at it as it bent over to reach a flame on its leg. He then, flaming branch in one hand and cleaver in the other, struck the ent in the head with both and it was defeated. A few days later, he returned to the orc colony that once called Utumno home. Goredhil Dread-Elf, the Ent-Slayer, now proudly leads them. As server events happen, the story will continue. And also to clear things up, no I dont want elvish gear. I will use normal faction gear like the others.

If I had to describe Goredhil and the role I may be filling, it would be heartless, nearly incapable of pity. He was warped from the start, even before going to Utumno it is clear, and simply has the mindset of a murderer. He is solemn and quiet most of the time, but when he speaks it is usually eery. He desires power and destruction above all else, and ultimately the fall of all Children of Illuvatar. It is likely that is all free peoples disappeared, he would kill himself. He dislikes the company of others, but can easily tolerate it if they are foul and orcish. In battle he can be described as highly strategic, but at times a berserker. He preferably wears a skull helmet for intimidation. He is never really caught unarmed and is quite paranoid in fact. He is always ready for an ambush or attack. Even in the heart of Angband where he frequently visits. He always has weapons and armor on hand. His choice weapon is the pike for dealing with those mounted, but he always has a cleaver at his side for everything else. He is skilled with a crossbow as proven twice in this app, and always has a knife hidden under his right sleeve. I am doing my best for quality roleplay, custom skin and all. I am going to pay attention to all details, and do my best.

Why should I be a faction leader? Well, for one I am a strategist and leader, I can easily maintain control. I am a strict rule follower, never once being banned on any server. Ever. I am very experienced in the LoTR Mod and Tolkien's lore. I am very active in the US Central Timezone, on daily or almost daily, and already know some who want me as leader. I am by no means new to RP roles, I was a Nazgul on the Second Age Server. I am a good builder and believe I am up for the role. I usually have very large ambition for builds and like to get it done. Now, when I say I am a strategist, I freakin mean it. I absolutely love figuring out how to seige a castle, and adore combat strategies. I do a lot of reading on medieval combat. I also am  a great diplomat, good at estimating what I can and cannot accomplish. I know when to strike and when to hold back. I think as I am rather PvP orientated, I would be a good fit for leading this hostile faction. I have a system for work, roles and authority already worked out with special tasks for each member. As I said I am active so recruiting isnt too hard. If this is approved, thank you!!! 