Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-30645975-20170530042053/@comment-30645975-20170530190225

Reddieeddie wrote: I like both of these, although the second poem seems to have a couple points which (to my ears) don't quite flow right.

And one other thing: Are these texts allowed to break the 4th wall?? Which points? I wrote this at 11 last night, so many fixes are probably due.

I was actually wondering the same thing myself. I could knock off the last stanzas, but that would leave a less dramatic ending (I feel). If it's allowed, I'd prefer to keep it in.