Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27991709-20170528055502/@comment-27991709-20170528072520

Thindithron the Great wrote: Mevans did say no grammatical errors, you know. You might want to revise a few parts- 'deep and deep' and 'beaconing' spring to mind. Alright made a few changes, but this is a poem, so there is a little more freedom with grammar.