Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-31507215-20180121180653/@comment-30645975-20180127222341

Sorry this is a little late but I was just checking the Lore Board and saw some new ones, this is very good! I like how it reads fast, fitting to a horse poem.

I would recommend changing  to , since that is the only 5-syllable line in the whole poem, and throws off the rhythm (to me at least)