Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-28565579-20170529205240/@comment-29773086-20170530063450

Jonnymoomoomoo wrote: Okay I have (just about) managed to alter my way out of those errors, please point out any further ones though - I do want this to be right! Not to be pessimistic of your efforts, but "Of a people's rejoice" still isn't quite right. I suggest one of the following: either replace it with 'A time to rejoice', or 'Of a time to rejoice.' (Unless you can think of something more apt.) That is, if you want maximum correctness.