Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-31507215-20180311195915

Howdy, folks!

Recently I came up with (what I think is) a cool idea. Basically, it would be to have poems about war, but from different factions, with both their writing styles and viewpoints.

Here are the versions of the poem for Orcs and Gondor, and when I get some more time, I will post others, such as for Elves, Rohan, Rhudel, etc.

#Written by S'moregoth A ruthless fear, a reckless storm, Closes in on ev'ry side. The fight goes on, yet still we mourn The loss of those who've died.
 * 1) author: {name:gondor_male} of Gondor
 * 2) title:War
 * 3) This is the Gondorian version of the poem/song.
 * 4) types:gondor
 * 1) This is the Gondorian version of the poem/song.
 * 2) types:gondor

With clash of steel, and dying wail; Like this is honour bought. And so with song and valiant tale, We honour those who fought.

#Written by S'moregoth We're off to fight! We're off to war! To kill and slash! To settle score! To slaughter Men! To burn and slay! Yar har! Yo ho! Ya ha! Ya hey!
 * 1) author:{name:orc_prefix}{name:orc_suffix}
 * 2) title:War
 * 3) This is the Orcish version of the poem/song.
 * 4) types:gundabad,eriador,angmar,dol_guldur,isengard,Mordor
 * 1) This is the Orcish version of the poem/song.
 * 2) types:gundabad,eriador,angmar,dol_guldur,isengard,Mordor

We're marching forth from mountains bleak! The grass will stain! The fields will reek! For many Men will die this day! Yar har! Yo ho! Ya ha! Ya hey!

Any input is appreciated!

P.S. If anybody has any thoughts on how to improve the last line of each stanza in the orc poem, please tell me!

 