Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-31684825-20170601182826/@comment-31684825-20170602155843

I thoroughly read everything on this post and have come to a conclusion. I have found that this story, while plausible, probably isn't what you guys are looking for; and, as demonstrated by the extremely long argument about the text, is really hard to understand without having read the rest of the story that I am writing. As I am not planning on divulging the rest of the story, I have decided to tell you: If you want to use the story, go right ahead mevans, but if not that's fine because I'm going to make a text for the Fall of Gondolin instead. Thank you all, the feedback has really helped me develop my story more (FYI the whole thing about Bregor and Iroth is a sub-story to my real one). Cheerio for now, and keep an eye out for my Gondolin story.