Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-35283741-20180424014655/@comment-35283741-20180424051138

Sir Lazuli wrote: Honestly I am not that good myself, the best way to get better is just practice.

On the last line perhaps a two-syllable word replacing “sorrowful” would be better. “Somber” or “cheerless” maybe? I especially think “wistful” would be good because of the alliteration.

Thank you. Fixed.