Thread:Eras of Arda Team/@comment-30238907-20170804165829/@comment-31996723-20170805100758

Good day Greyhound.

This is a very well-written backstory, but there are some major inconsistencies in your application in regards to lore. You mention your character has gone to Gondolin and killed a person IN Gondolin. There is no way this could have happened. First off, the chance of you finding Gondolin would be near impossible - someone like Morgoth had his best scouts look for it and he would never have found it had it not been for a certain traitor from Gondolin. Now assuming you would find Gondolin, there is no way you would get back out again. Turgon's laws are strict; those who enters Tumladen will never get out again. So there is no way Turgon would have let you out of the city, should you find it. You would die trying without Turgon's permission. The part about dwarves doesn't sound too right either, but the main issue here is Gondolin.

We can only accept this application if the part about Gondolin gets removed - period. Other than that the application is well-written and we do some some potential in you and your character.

Best regards, the Lore Administration.