User blog comment:Calbeius or Urukgoth/A Calbeius Original: The Rise of Guldur part 3/@comment-25841881-20160106040500

Here is my problem with your writing: The speech of the characters. For example, they wouldn't refer to it as East Lorien. They probably wouldn't even name a place when they say "The Lorien Elves dont have enough troops to attack East Lorien"