Thread:ArcenGamer/@comment-35456756-20180818165632/@comment-32352572-20180820032558

SWVWC wrote: Oh, and, in an attempt to prove my value, but in no means an attempt to downgrade your writing abilities, I noticed that you gave no reason why Barin would help you. Especially considering your attire, e.g. the hat is usually worn by either oddment collectors or bandits. This can be changed by adding a backstory to Barin, how he, during one of his travels, was saved by a ranger. On another note, be sure to write basic needs for the charecter, such as his routine to make camp, or to bottle and drink water. Give more relatable elements to your character. You havent said whether Arcen is a first or last name, his age, or if he has any living lineage. If so, whom? Just trying to help I plan to flesh out Barin a lot more later on in the series (somethine along the lines of what you suggested.) As for lineage, age, etc I mean the character has no memory so ya know... As for the name I think that most would auto-assume first name. And the basic needs thing I don't quite understand what exactly you mean. I mean he doesn't really have routines seeing as he remember the last 48 or so hours. Am I misunderstanding what you are saying? Please clarify