Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-28565579-20170529205240/@comment-29773086-20170529221539

"Were they forgave" is not quite right, grammatically. Forgiven is the correct term in this case.

And "Of eternal rejoice" would be, correctly, "Of eternal rejoicing".

Of course neither of the corrections fit the rhyme, so the lines need to be either reworded or left alone.