Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-2602:30A:2C3F:6540:B8B4:D86B:6E54:C008-20181024022145/@comment-34241117-20181024174407

Hemm... this has some potential to it buuutt.... too short. Make it a BIT longer. #2) massacred, not mascered. Tell a bit more dude, we know nothing. Too much happened too quickly. This guy Allinion came into ithilien, some rangers just randomly brought him to their hideout, let them see their captain who just let him hire some men? Then he just runs out into the night, gets ambushed by orcs.