Board Thread:Forum Roleplays/@comment-25124648-20150713005908/@comment-27718380-20150715155503

DavidReidHowe wrote: name Shurtagul

age: created before first age

faction: arandor

race: minor maiar

gender: male

skills: fast strong cunning convincing good with a bow

armor: galvorn armour with the arandorian standard and colors (a gold eagle with a blue and purple grdient background and 2 swords dripping blood behind the eagle)

apperance: tall with blonde hair purple eyes and a scar over left eye

faction allies: most of the far haradrimm moria dwarves nad they are negotiating with umbar

faction enemies : near harad petrogwaith and gondor

weapons: a  mithitiril pike and mithiril arrows

backstory: shurtagul lived in rohan, but when political disputes broke out he lead 2/3 of the rohirrim to join with some eaterlings and mercanaries they formed arandor arandor lived in fa harad where they helped the tauredain fight rival tribes in return they got mumakil and exotic fruits, the arandors now are marching to umbar

army: 750 dire wolves

14 war mumakil

8 bredding mumakil

3500 pikemen

4500 companion calvary

750 axemen

3000 soldiers with muskets

1500 soldiers with blunderbusses

500 flintlock duel wield soldiers

1500 swordsmen

2000 spearsmen

2500 mounted archers

3000 archers

500 heavy archers

350 elite guard,

20 onagers

15 siege towers

3 battering rams

quirks: sutbborn and gets in a fight easily

goals: to conquer near harad with the help of their allies the far haradrimm and they will negotiate with umbar List of OP things and things that don't add up:

1. Maia

2. Galvorn armour

3. Far too many allies. They would be neutral, not allies.

4. You forget to mention Mordor, Angmar, Dunland, Hobbits and the elves, and rangers. Oh and Forodwaith.

5. Mithril weapons. Not one, no no. That isn't OP enough! He must have 2.

6. Maia don't live in Rohan

7. Maia don't go to ME except with a proper reason.

8. CRAZY army.

9. Did I mention that the army was big?

10. HUGE HUGE army.

11. Nothing really wrong with his character in the quirks.

12. You say Umbar are allies but negotiating with them suggests hostility