Thread:ArcenGamer/@comment-35456756-20180818165632/@comment-35456756-20180820015617

Oh, and, in an attempt to prove my value, but in no means an attempt to downgrade your writing abilities, I noticed that you gave no reason why Barin would help you. Especially considering your attire, e.g. the hat is usually worn by either oddment collectors or bandits. This can be changed by adding a backstory to Barin, how he, during one of his travels, was saved by a ranger. On another note, be sure to write basic needs for the charecter, such as his routine to make camp, or to bottle and drink water. Give more relatable elements to your character. You havent said whether Arcen is a first or last name, his age, or if he has any living lineage. If so, whom? Just trying to help