Thread:Sinthorion/@comment-4750818-20150217160114/@comment-27723099-20150314204416

Sorry, I forgot about this.

Your story is good but I don't like the usage of the online names in it. They destroy the RP feeling a bit. Maybe you could make up new names that fit to Middle Earth but still let the reader conclude which wiki member is meant.

The music fits thematically though it's not always the best choice. Generally, TSFH is too intense for a Middle Earth adventure and nearly every piece sounds like a very big battle. Colin Frake On Fire Mountain fits much better to an adventure since it's also made for an adventure story (and you used it already for some chapters).

I added Youtube links to make it easier to find the music.