Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-26065088-20170530183252/@comment-30645975-20170530191051

A few things I happened to notice:

Names are {name:hobbit_male} or {name:hobbit_female}.

Special tip: A good bottle of chocolate comparing the pancakes is always no mistake Not sure what you're going for but it comes out a little jumbled...

nearby tavern which offers the tasty food Although this seems technically correct, I would recommend changing that to this tasty food

That seems to be all.