Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-27200931-20170601032527/@comment-27200931-20170602053639

Thindithron the Great wrote: This tale sounds a bit like a play (or perhaps a parable?), tbh- the present tense that you use gives that sense. Not saying that there's anything wrong with that, but I think the past tense is more apt for legends or histories and the like, in most cases. Both the present tense and the repetitiveness of the dialogue are there to give a more exotic feeling to the text. Rhûn is a far away land, so I figured the structure of the text should look a bit strange to the reader. Hopefully it worked.