Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-32150364-20170530144128/@comment-28565579-20170530145327

your #title etc should have a colon, i.e. the first  three lines become:


 * 1) author:Tuor
 * 2) title:Gondolin: A Memory
 * 3) types:lindon,rivendell,eregion

Also I suggest you read it through outload - it took me about 3 stanzas to realise it was meant to rhyme and be a poem, because the syllables are a tad all over the place. In poems rhythm/metre are important, and can massively affect the feel of the poem - in this case, you are talking about something grand and strong, so a regular, relatively simple rhythm would lend itself better to the setting than what you have done, i.e. something which lacks a solid rhythm or structure to the line lengths

It is good though! Just try reading it outload, and I think you will understand what I mean