Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-4750818-20181104122709/@comment-33185350-20181104145617

“Any advice for travellers?”

Anyway, very nice lore text. My only suggestions is to refer to Caradhras as “he” rather than “it” as Gimli does in the books. For example, in your text, “...As Caradhras is known to have a mind of his own...”