Board Thread:Lore Texts/@comment-28565579-20170529205240/@comment-28565579-20170529213555

You may be right that "awayed" is not technically a word, I use it occasionally, so I probably just made it up - it does sound like it could be a word at least :P

I was trying to avoid using "But" again since it already appears in the 7th and 8th stanzas, but yeah, I think you are right that it flows better with an extra word - I think I will add it in anyway :)

thank you very much :) I wrote it a few months ago (why? I can't remember - I just love the imagery of the Akallabeth!) and just finished off the last couple of paragraphs today

thanks for the help!